I blew into this world on a leaf.
I’m still blowing.
I don’t think I’ll ever land.
I do that trick quite a lot, sometimes twice a day
“I think they’re better from afar, because no one here’s gonna save us.”
there’s been some confusion, for you see my crewmate is
I HAVE WAITED FOR THIS ALL MY LIFE OH MY GOD
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the xbox one looks like they had a really bad divide at board meetings deciding what it should look like, and couldn’t come to an agreement
this is like the only mention of communism in the entire movie
It’s too easy.